Made of Ease

So.
Tonight my cousin asked me to help her write a poem similar to the poem by William Carlos Williams called "The Red Wheelbarrow" for her English class. I ended up writing it for her because she's got so many other things that she needs to do because her finals are coming up and she's scrambling to get things done.

Please let me know what you think??

The Red Wheelbarrow
William Carlos Williams

so much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens.

My version

so much depends
on

a bed made of
ease

forever bathed in
warmth

inside the igloo of
life



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